Racehorses are born knowing how to run. But, unlike Seabiscuit on the track, I had no idea what I was doing when I first decided to write a book.

Thirty years ago, I had experienced a true-life, frightening, adventure involving both a Mexican drug cartel and the Kentucky Derby. I was dying to share my story with an audience and had always planned to write a book. When I finally sat down at my computer to write the story…I was compelled to get to the finish line with a winning manuscript.

My memories of the adventure needed a refresh, and I knew I’d have to do other research about the 1988 Kentucky Derby. In developing the story about a billionaire owner of an NFL football team, a famous racehorse trainer, and one of the richest men in Mexico who was suspected of being a cartel leader, I knew if I got the facts wrong, I could be sued—or worse. I spent three months doing research.

First Time Author Mark Paul 1988

Thirty years ago, I had experienced a true-life, frightening, adventure involving both a Mexican drug cartel and the Kentucky Derby. I was dying to share my story with an audience and had always planned to write a book.

At first, I chose to write as a first-person narrator. After all, it was my story. It didn’t work, and I tore up my first draft. I started writing again, using third-person point of view, and was delighted to feel freer; I got myself out of the way. I studied the genre of creative non-fiction and knew it would work. For inspiration, I watched every gambling movie ever made and hated them all because each had a depressing ending. My book had to be fun; I wanted to recreate the colorful gamblers and other deranged characters I’d met during the adventure!

What a joyous five months I spent writing the first draft! Bouncing out of bed at 5:30 am, seven days per week to write in the quiet of the dawn, I was giddy, happy, and joyful to be doing something creative after decades of working in real estate. I was doing something new! I was so enthusiastic I wanted my friends to read the story! Who was the first reader? My wife, of course. From her I learned my female characters needed rewrites to depict their real-life personalities in more powerful ways. So, I rewrote, again, and again.

My wife was key during the rewrite. Through her wisdom, I got the book out of my man cave and into the light of day. I spent days writing the characters and dialog for the women of my story and shared them with her (to bask in the brilliance I had created). She still told me that my female characters remained one-dimensional, especially the leading female, Ava, who was a smart and feisty character in true life. I rewrote, again, and again.

The next readers were my golf buddies. They liked it! Except they told me I could not punctuate and apparently had never seen a comma before. I rewrote, again, and again.

I live in Los Angeles—where movie people are like mosquitos in Minnesota. I gave the book to a friend who is a big-time movie agent and producer. He actually read it! He asked if he could share it with professional script readers but warned that they would be brutal with their candor and advice. (OK, it was not really advice; more like aggressive, blunt trauma criticism).

One month later, I received their verdict: the manuscript is tragically flawed. It had a pulse but should be destroyed to avoid damage to the reading public. The producer was kind, however, and met with me for an hour to discuss the fact that I did have a great story…told from the wrong perspective. I had written a good story about gamblers. If I wanted a book that only appealed to gamblers, I had done a decent job. I could sell 600 books and get back to my day job. But, if I wanted a book and perhaps a movie that everyone would want to read, the story had to be about the real heroine: the spectacular female racehorse, Winning Colors. She’d proven herself in a world championship against the male colts in the 1988 Kentucky Derby! He advised me to “make her the Sun that all the gamblers, and trainers, and Mexican cartel members orbited around.” If I could write that story, men and women readers all over the world would be excited to read my book! Oh, and the professional script readers also told me the women characters in my book were poorly written. I rewrote, again, and again.

Winning Colors

If I wanted a book that everyone would want to read, the story had to be about the real heroine: the spectacular female racehorse, Winning Colors. She’d proven herself in a world championship against the male colts in the 1988 Kentucky Derby!

Three months later, I made the wise decision to hire a professional editor. I was introduced to Mary Holden by another new author and sent the manuscript to her. She loved the story and was enthusiastic even as she gently told me how my writing needed to become more professional and showed me the way to become a better writer. I rewrote, again, and again.

Now I had an edited first draft. What to do next? I had no idea. I asked a real estate marketing expert to prepare a draft book cover. I had some great photos of the 1988 Kentucky Derby, of Winning Colors, and the newspaper stories about the cartel murders. I took the manuscript to Kinko’s and printed 20 copies, with color photos. I passed them out to more readers. Another good friend who loved the story shared it with a successful Hollywood cinematographer who gave it to a well-known producer. They optioned it for a movie or TV series.

Now that I had a finished, well-edited, revised manuscript in final draft, I needed a publisher. The book was sent to 40 publishers, of which 30 ignored it, eight declined it, two read it, and of those two, one said it needed to be rewritten “to be more literary.”

I decided to gamble and self-publish. I found Stephanie Chandler and Authority Publishing. I bought Chandler’s book, The Nonfiction Book Publishing Plan: The Professional Guide to Profitable Self-Publishing. I liked her professionalism and I hired her. She was the ultimate pro and knew how to do everything for publishing the eBook, paperback, and hardcover, and improving the book cover and book title. She also directed me to Findaway Voices to create an audiobook. I then hired narrator Will Damron, winner of Best 2018 Audible.com Nonfiction Audiobook of the Year. Stephanie also sent me to www.authorbytes.com create the book’s website.

The creation of a video trailer for The Greatest Gambling Story Ever Told turned out to be a positive idea. I now had 47 seconds of video to share and market on Facebook, Twitter, the website, and other social media venues. I have had over 100,000 downloads


In January 2020, the book appeared on amazon.com. Two books sold on the first day (thanks, mom!). Then I researched Amazon’s “Keywords” by studying YouTube videos for hours. I bought some ads for the book on Amazon. I spent 30 hours the first week learning the system, and 20 hours every week for the next two months refining those ads. That’s why I value this quotation: “I didn’t think; I experimented.” ~ Anthony Burgess

Selling this book was my goal, but I had no idea if I would be successful. My hope was to sell at least 1,000 books, but I feared seeing weak numbers. And I might have—had I not used the ads—because they worked. In the first month, January, 162 books were sold; 740 in February; 1,113 in March, 3,067 in April. By May 2020, an additional 4,920 books sold for a total of 10,000 in under five months.

The Greatest Gambling Story Ever Told Book Cover

The Greatest Gambling Story Ever Told has sold over 10,000 books in less than five months.

Being a self-published author, I also keep refining my “Book Details” and “Editorial Reviews” on Amazon Central, as there are ways to use HTML and other techniques to improve the presentation of a book on Amazon. For instance, an author can have 10 categories for both eBook and print books (and this is important). I have now purchased ads on several horseracing sites, and on Facebook and Twitter.

Here are nine things I learned during my two-year publishing journey:

  1. Write a book for passion, not money. Writing is one of the greatest joys I have ever experienced. To unleash your creativity is to discover new things about yourself.
  2. Writing and publishing is an expensive hobby. The book is now profitable, because I was fortunate to sell a lot of books after a big cash up-front outlay.
  3. Hire professionals! You need pros to design your book cover and interior, to edit, and to encourage you every step along the way. I succeeded as an author because of assistance from several professionals.
  4. You must have great graphics for the book’s cover and a unique, compelling title.
  5. Ask friends if they are willing to read and critique your book as it goes from edit to edit. You cannot do this in a vacuum. You need feedback from smart, engaged, and honest readers.
  6. Market, advertise, and promote your book every day! If you are unwilling to do this, sell your manuscript to a major publishing house and let it do your marketing.
  7. Have a good story and great characters. Be a vivacious storyteller.
  8. Do not be afraid to self-publish or hire a paid publisher. I succeeded because I had the freedom to aggressively promote the book myself. And, I love controlling my own content and making my own marketing decisions.
  9. Commit fully. You must tell everyone you have a great book and you are going to be a successful author. If you do not believe it, why will they?

What are my next steps? I believe I need media help to go to the next level. I am now marketing to podcasters, radio shows, sports, and true crime journalists. And, I am working to find other creative ways to inspire people to read The Greatest Gambling Story Ever Told because it’s so much more than just a few days at the races!

Mark Paul – Author – The Greatest Gambling Story Ever Told

6 Comments

  1. Stephanie Chandler on June 10, 2020 at 1:16 pm

    What a great share! It’s been a pleasure working with you, Mark. You’ve worked hard for your success and have earned every bit of it. I can’t wait to see what the future holds for this wonderful book!

    • Joel Adelman on June 10, 2020 at 6:06 pm

      As a life long racing fan and thoroughbred owner I loved the adventure of it. Many times you read gambling stories without much substance. This book engulfs you into the characters lives and desires. You just can’t put ot down.

  2. Linda Williams on June 28, 2020 at 11:31 pm

    My neighborhood book club read your book. Suggested by this month’s host. I enjoyed listening to the audiobook while I walked my huskies in the neighborhood. I like to do additional research on the book and author before our meeting to discuss the book. Thank you for this insight into your writing process. Looking forward to sharing it tomorrow night. I am going to suggest your book to my second book club. That book club always reads California authors , books written about California or that take place in California. I think they will enjoy your book as well. Can’t believe it’s a true story! You guys are CrAzy! LOL

  3. Tamara Dever on June 29, 2020 at 5:30 pm

    Fantastic job and thanks for sharing, Mark! Love your advice, especially #9 on your list. Truth! Hope you have a sequel in the works. 😉

  4. Carol on June 30, 2020 at 7:57 am

    Just finished your book! I got into watching TVG during the pandemic and have found watching horse racing to be a great and much needed diversion in stressful times. We’ve been going up to Saratoga for years and always loved the racetrack and more importantly, the horses. I stumbled upon your book on Amazon and really enjoyed learning more about Winning Colors as well as Wayne and Jeff Lukas. What a ride (literally) it must have been to be one of the connections of this great filly! What a game of risk you played, but I guess it paid off.

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